Pirates and Privateers
The History of Maritime
Piracy
Cindy Vallar, Editor
& Reviewer
P.O. Box 425,
Keller, TX 76244-0425
Books for Adults ~ Historical
Fiction: Pirates & Privateers & Nautical
Fiction
Trident
The Pyrate
The Reaper
HMS Seawolf
Barracuda
Seahorse
Peregrine
Leopard
Trident
By Michael Aye
Biting Duck Press, 2014, print ISBN 978-1-938463-12-9,
US $20.99
e-book ISBN 978-1-938463-08-2, US $9.99
With Britain at war with the
American rebels and their French allies,
Captain Sir Gabriel Anthony commands HMS Trident,
a third rate ship of the line and the
flagship of Rear Admiral Rupert Buck’s
squadron. Convoy duty can be tedious, but
each day brings Gabe closer to Barbados
and time off to visit with his wife and
newborn son. Duty intervenes, which causes
a rift between Gabe and Faith, who sides
with her countrymen in their bid for
independence. Her threat to take their son
home to America weighs heavy on his mind
when he should focus on his assignment.
Thus begins Trident, the sixth
title in The Fighting Anthonys series.
After American privateers steal the army’s
payroll, Gabe is tasked with rescuing the
British officers imprisoned on St. Croix.
Although the Danes claim neutrality in
this revolution, they permit the Americans
to come and go as they please. Gabe and
his men succeed in their mission, but Lord
Skalla of the Foreign Office learns from
the freed prisoners that the American
privateers plan to team up with French
warships to prey on British merchant ships
in the Indian Ocean. If successful, such a
maneuver can devastate the British
economy. Rather than patching things up
with his wife, Gabe must sail half a world
away to stop the enemy.
Three of Aye’s own poems introduce each
part of the book, hinting at what is to
come. He also includes a who’s who of
characters, a glossary of nautical terms,
and an historical note, which includes
information about the pirates of
Madagascar.
Even though I haven't read the previous
books in this series, Trident easily
works as a stand-alone. Aye vividly
recreates life aboard an 18th-century
warship, but abstains from inundating
readers with ship-handling information. He
expertly weaves in history and backstory
to craft a nautical tale that immediately
captures the reader, and his rousing sea
battles bring us to the edge of our seats.
Trident is a fast-paced,
compelling story populated with memorable
characters.
Review Copyright ©2014 Cindy Vallar
The Pyrate: The Rise of Cooper
Cain
By Michael Aye
Boson Books, 2015, ISBN 978-1-938463-26-6, US
$29.99
e-book ISBN 978-1-938463-27-3, US $9.99
His
father’s gambling debts leave Cooper Cain
beholden to his uncle, but Cooper’s presence
gnaws at his jealous cousin. The rift grows
until his cousin’s lie rouses his uncle’s ire,
leaving eighteen-year-old Cooper with a facial
scar and forced to flee his mother and their
home. In January 1810, feeling betrayed and
vowing revenge, he sails for Antigua where he
hopes to one day reclaim his family’s
plantation, which his uncle now controls.
Also aboard the
ship are David MacArthur, a former lieutenant
in the Royal Navy, and the lieutenant governor
of Antigua, his wife, and three daughters. The
trip proves uneventful until a sail is
sighted. Before long, the ship, her crew, and
her passengers find themselves at the mercy of
pirates. When their captain, Eli Taylor,
invites Cooper and Mac to join them, they are
reluctant to become outlaws. Only the seizing
of two of the governor’s daughters, who are to
be held for ransom, sways them to go on the
account, if only to protect the girls from
harm.
Eli Taylor may
be the captain of the Raven and her
motley crew of pirates, but he’s also a
gentleman. Nevertheless, he brooks no
disobedience, a lesson Cooper and Mac quickly
learn when one pirate goes against the
captain’s orders. With the ship’s hold filled
to the brim, the pirates head for Barataria to
sell their plunder. During the voyage, Eli
gauges the mettle and skills of both new
recruits, who are treated as outcasts until
they prove themselves to be true brethren of
the seas. Mac’s training in the navy makes him
a skilled navigator and ship’s master, while
Cooper’s natural swordsmanship and quick
thinking demonstrate his leadership abilities.
Perhaps with the right kind of mentoring, he
may one day become the Raven’s
captain, for Eli wants to retire from pirating
and become a respectable member of society.
At Barataria,
Jean LaFitte sells their plunder and, while
the Ravens disburse to spend their ill-gotten
booty, Eli takes Cooper, Mac, and the girls to
the home of Cindy Veigh, a respectable lady
who will watch over the girls until their
ransom is paid. During their stay, Cooper
meets the exotic Sophia and falls in love. She
is another man’s mistress and Cooper lacks
sufficient funds to purchase her contract.
Eli’s
legitimate business ventures have made him
wealthy and, with his guidance and backing,
Cooper pursues his new life in hopes of one
day gaining the wealth he requires to reclaim
his birthright and to make Sophia his wife. To
that end they return to plundering, among
which are the merchant ships in his uncle’s
fleet. This provides Cooper with the first
opportunity to begin wreaking vengeance on his
uncle and cousin. The pirates’ success also
brings Cooper new enemies, especially when he
thwarts the plans of El Diablo. Doing so makes
Cooper a marked man, for this bloodthirsty and
cruel pirate promises to make him pay for his
interference.
The Pyrate
hosts a long list of characters, some of whom
are real historical personages, whiles others
are fictional. The real smugglers and
pirates/privateers of Barataria include Jean
and Pierre Laffite, Dominique Youx, Louis “Nez
Coupé” Chighizola, Renato Beluche, and Vincent
Gambi. The legendary José Gaspar also appears.
It is the great cast of minor characters –
with memorable names like Rooster, Spurlock,
and Quang – who truly bring the story to life.
A few characters from Aye’s other series – the
Fighting Anthonys and War of 1812 – also make
appearances.
The themes that
Aye explores in The Pyrate, the first
novel in a new historical trilogy, are meant
for adults. The topics are authentic and
entertaining, but brutal and explicit. Revenge
is the one theme that is never fully
developed, even though the opening of the
story implies it will be a key factor in
Cooper’s life.* There are only occasional
references to indicate that he achieves some
payback against his uncle and cousin, but the
confrontational climax fails to occur. In
spite of this minor flaw, The Pyrate
is filled with action and adventure, as well
as a bit of romance, and is sure to please
readers who enjoy gritty realism and
historical accuracy in their piratical tales.
*Special note: Michael
Aye assures me that the revenge
theme will be carried out through
all three books with Cooper's final
blow against his cousin occurring in
the final book.
Review Copyright ©2015 Cindy
Vallar
The Reaper
By Michael Aye
Boson Books, 2017, ISBN 978-1-932482-56-0,
US $16.95
e-book ISBN 978-1-932482-57-7, US $9.95
After preventing
pirates from capturing a convoy of
East India Company (EIC) ships,
Captain Gilbert Anthony finds his
life and career in the Royal Navy
forever altered. Newspapers tout
his bravery and honor throughout
the kingdom. A grateful EIC honors
him with gold coins and a
ceremonial sword. The king bestows
on him a knighthood. His father
entrusts him with training his
half brother, Midshipman Gabriel
Anthony, to become a naval
officer. This last task also
involves inheriting Gabe’s uncle,
who seems to be Gabe’s protector,
but Dagan is a skilled topman with
sharp eyes, which makes him an
asset aboard Gil’s ship.
On
his father’s death, Gil becomes
the Earl of Deerfield, but the
Admiralty has need of him far
from England’s shores. Colonial
grievances have been mounting
and the possibility of war
looms. A more immediate threat
is the pirates preying on
merchant ships in the Caribbean
and off the coast of America.
With his recent success against
such rogues, the Admiralty
thinks he’s the best one to
confront this menace. To aid in
this endeavor Gil assumes
command of HMS Drakkar,
one of the realm’s largest
frigates captured in 1759 from
the French. Gabe will serve as
the senior midshipman; among the
other gentlemen joining the crew
are a young boy named Mr. Davy
and Fourth Lieutenant
Witzenfeld.
Soon
after the frigate sails for
Antigua, Witzenfeld reveals his
true character – a cruel tyrant
with a temper and a vulgar mouth
to match. He continually
persecutes Davy, which brings
the lieutenant into contention
with Gabe. Problems escalate,
forcing Gil to find a tactful
way to deal with the problem and
convince the crew that they can
trust him while demonstrating no
favoritism or permitting abuse.
A
second complication comes when
they sight two schooners
plundering a barque. One woman
who survives the attack is Lady
Deborah McKean, to whom Gil
finds himself attracted – a
thought that irks him since she
just witnessed the murder of her
husband, as well as the brutal
rapes and murders of the other
women aboard the merchant ship.
Turning his attention to his
purpose for coming to the West
Indies, Gil gathers what scant
information he can of the
attack, leaving him with more
questions than answers. That
trend continues after further
encounters with the pirates,
including rumors of a fifty-gun
black ship with black sails.
Might there be someone ashore in
league with the pirates? Why do
they rarely leave survivors,
even those who might garner high
ransoms? Or is there a more
nefarious purpose behind the
attacks? When a coded letter
falls into Gil’s hands, he
acquires vital information that
might lead to answers . . . if
they can decode the message.
First
issued in 2005, The Reaper
is the first book in The
Fighting Anthonys series and
this new edition has been
revised. Readers are quickly
drawn into this high seas
adventure, rife with action and
interwoven with romance. It even
includes some original poetry by
Aye. While no decisive
indication of the time frame is
provided, it occurs sometime
after the Battle of Quiberon Bay
(November 1759) and July 1775
when the epilogue takes place.
If there is any drawback at all
in the story, it is that it ends
too soon. The Reaper
definitely snares the reader
into wanting to read the second
volume, HMS Seawolf.
The Reaper is, indeed, a
worthy addition to the growing
collection of nautical fiction.
Review Copyright ©2018 Cindy Vallar
HMS SeaWolf
By Michael Aye
Boson Books, 2008, print ISBN
978-1-932482-52-2, US $16.95
e-book ISBN 978-1-932482-53-9, US $9.95
Set
early in the Revolutionary
War, HMS SeaWolf is
the second installment in The
Fighting Anthonys saga. It
recounts a fictional version
of the very real threat that
American privateers posed,
attacking merchant shipping to
acquire much needed gunpowder
and armament for General
Washington’s Continental Army,
but seen from the perspective
of the men and officers of the
Royal Navy.
Stationed in
the north Atlantic, Admiral
Lord Gilbert Anthony’s
squadron must cruise from
Nantucket to Sable Island,
east of Nova Scotia. His
orders are to protect
merchant shipping convoys
from privateers who consider
these waters their personal
raiding grounds. Although he
misses his half brother, who
is in the Caribbean, he also
realizes that keeping him
close hinders Gabe’s career.
Lieutenant
Gabriel Anthony doesn’t
necessarily agree with the
war between the American
colonies and the British,
but that doesn’t keep him
from doing his duty. His
current assignment has taken
him to Barbados to deliver
dispatches, which is why the
commander in the Caribbean
slightly alters those
orders. His Majesty’s troops
stationed in Halifax have
dire need of the convoy
slated to deliver gunpowder
and troops there. Under no
circumstances can the Royal
Navy afford to lose another
cargo to the rebels, which
is why Gabe finds himself
inching his way northward
playing nursemaid to the
ships. HMS SeaWolf and
her men prefer to run free,
but can only go as fast as
the slowest vessel under
their protection.
One master
disregards Gabe’s commands
and sets out ahead of the
convoy. As all the vessels
head toward Charleston,
South Carolina, they
encounter a storm that
separates the ships where
the enemy privateers are
known to hunt. When all but
Turtle are accounted
for, Gabe suspects that her
master may be in league with
strange sails sighted by the
lookout. As SeaWolf pursues,
his suspicions are
confirmed. During the
offloading of the precious
cargo by the enemy, Gabe
attempts a daring plan to
retake Turtle. An
unexpected consequence
results in an explosion that
sends Gabe, the men who
accompany him aboard the
wayward vessel, and Turtle’s
master to kingdom come.
Aboard SeaWolf
everyone mourns Gabe’s
loss, except for his uncle.
Although chances of
surviving the conflagration
are slim, Dagan Dupree is
certain his nephew yet
lives, but he is unable to
do anything about it. It is
wrong for Lord Anthony to
hear the news from anyone
else’s lips. Reluctantly,
Dagan sails north with the
rest of the convoy, while at
the same time vowing to
return to find Gabe and
bring him home.
A few early
scenes are a bit disjointed;
their purpose for inclusion
is uncertain and they aren’t
connected to the main plot.
Nor are pronouns always
clear as to who is who, as
in the scene with a
commodore before the convoy
leaves Barbados. In the
e-book format that I read,
there were several
explanatory notes, but the
numbers aren’t linked to the
endnotes, requiring readers
to manually go to the end of
the book and then return to
the story where they left
off reading.
Aside from
these minor issues, Aye
weaves together the
intriguing topics of
gunpowder thefts, white
slavery, sexual abuse,
romance, and a planned
invasion of Nova Scotia to
craft a fast-paced novel
that holds the reader’s
attention from first page to
last. Original poetry
introduces each part of the
story, and Aye also includes
a glossary for those
unfamiliar with nautical
terminology. He further
spices the tale with a
strange alliance between
enemies with Dagan on one
side and Francis Marion, the
Swamp Fox, on the other.
Equally satisfying are
resolutions to several
questions that Gil and Gabe
were left to ponder when the
first book in the series
ended. Whether old fans or
new, HMS SeaWolf is
a delightful addition to the
stories about the Anthony
brothers and the men of the
Royal Navy who served with
them.
Review Copyright ©2018
Cindy Vallar
Barracuda
By Michael Aye
Boson Books, 2008, print ISBN
978-1-932482-61-4, US $16.95
b-book ISBN 978-1-932482-62-1, US
$9.95
A mail packet
pounded to bits, a
flagship sunk, and a
devastating attack on a
sixty-four-gun ship send
Admiral Lord Gilbert
Anthony and his squadron
to Saint Augustine,
Florida. His mission is
twofold: protect the
British port and its
merchant shipping, and
stop American privateers’
raids in 1776. Gil and his
men enjoy the warmer
climate after a stint in
the North Atlantic during
winter, but these waters
are prime hunting grounds
that also provide
excellent hiding places
for the rebels and their
allies.
After
delivering dispatches on
their way to Florida,
Lieutenant Gabriel
Anthony, captain of HMS
SeaWolf, and his
longtime friend,
Lieutenant Francis
Markham of HMS Swan,
investigate distant
gunfire. What they
witness are two ships
attacking a brig. The
red and yellow sails
identify one of the
attackers as a Spanish
frigate; instead of
allowing the prey to
surrender, the Spaniard
pounds the brig into
oblivion. Only
twenty-seven men
survive.
Nor is this
the Royal Navy’s only
encounter with the
Spanish “ghost ship,” as
she becomes known,
because the frigate
always seems to vanish
afterward. Although the
reason for such
viciousness and the
identity of her master
are unknown, the Anthony
brothers realize they
must stop this Spaniard
and his vendetta against
the British. When
patrols prove fruitless,
Gil alters his strategy.
They will seek out as
much intelligence as
possible before
launching any attacks.
Information provides
clues that lead them to
the Keys, but it will
take skill and cunning,
as well as luck, to
bring the enemy to heel.
This third
installment in this
nautical series weaves
together high action
with numerous subplots
providing vivid glimpses
into rivalries, long
absences from family,
life at sea and in port,
love between enemies,
and a court martial
involving ear biting.
There are some minor
irks – a wounded
character who
miraculously heals,
incorrect words (i.e.,
“to” for too, “partial”
for “parcel”), and a
climactic battle that
ends too quickly – but
the humor, longing, and
adventures overcome
these. Fans will enjoy
this fast-paced and
satisfying episode in
the saga of the Fighting
Anthonys.
Review Copyright ©2018
Cindy Vallar
Seahorse
By Michael Aye
Boson Books, 2010, ISBN
978-0-917990-90-8, US $18.95
Ebook ISBN 978-1-917990-91-5, US
$9.99
An alert seaman hears
the sound of gunfire. Out of the
dense fog blanketing Carlisle Bay
a fireship emerges. Those aboard
HMS Prudent must deal
with this threat before they can
assist the anchored convoy. Only
later is it revealed just how
successful the ruse worked. It is
but the latest of the daring raids
by enemy privateers on British
shipping in 1777.
Admiral
Lord Gilbert Anthony savors his
time ashore in England, getting to
know his new daughter and renewing
his acquaintance with his wife,
Lady Deborah. While they enjoy
their rare moments alone, his half
brother Gabriel savors his recent
promotion to Captain and eagerly
awaits his upcoming nuptials with
Faith Montique, whom he rescued
from her nefarious uncle’s evil
doings in South Carolina.
Such
idyllic leisure ends much sooner
than expected when both men
receive new orders. Given a new
flagship, Gil is to take up
command of the Windward Islands
and transport Lord Ragland to his
new post as governor of Barbados.
Gabe also receives a new, but
unhappy, ship. Half of HMS Peregrine’s
crew have deserted and the
other half requested transfers.
Refusing to be left ashore once
again, both their wives declare
that they will accompany their
husbands on this voyage and then
take up residence at Lady
Deborah’s home on Antigua.
Before
they depart, thugs posing as
highwaymen attempt to assassinate
Gil. A letter from Gabe’s uncle,
Dagan, who stayed behind in the
colonies to visit with family and
his new lady love, warns of
approaching ill winds and that he
will rendezvous with them in the
Caribbean. Soon after the squadron
departs Plymouth, escorting a
convoy of merchant ships, the
brothers discover just how cocky
and daring the rebel privateers
are after strange sails are
sighted, vanish, and then launch a
surprise attack. On their arrival
in the West Indies, the news
worsens as the war progresses.
General Burgoyne surrenders, the
British are preparing to evacuate
Philadelphia, and the evidence
confirms that soon after the New
Year the French will join the
Americans, which means the Spanish
will as well.
The
saga of The Fighting Anthonys
continues in this fourth book in
the series. As always, readers are
treated to original poetry (such
as “The Forgotten Salt”) from the
author. These serve to introduce
each of the three parts that make
up the story. Unlike previous
installments, this one is less
even in the telling. What happens
after the white flag is hoisted in
chapter 15 is never clearly
stated. Aside from Gabe’s first
boarding of Peregrine,
readers never see how he turns an
unhappy ship into a happy one.
While the scene depicting a
lightning strike is astonishing,
it lacks sufficient tension and
Gil’s recovery is too quickly
dispensed with. The ball scene
flits from one character to
another and Lord Ragland’s comment
about not knowing what comes over
a minor character’s behavior is
one the reader will readily
understand. There is no hint of
this trait prior to its
occurrence; nor does it surface
anywhere else in the story. Some
readers may also find the
occasional interruptions in
dialogue and narrative to explain
nautical words – such as “sweeps
(long oars)” – annoying. The book
includes a glossary, where some of
these words, but not others, are
defined.
On
the other hand, Seahorse is
fraught with danger both on land
and at sea. The assassination
attempt on Gil is but the first
“ill wind” they encounter; an
enemy from the past carries out a
vendetta against the brothers and
anyone they love is fair game.
There’s a perilous duel and a
suspenseful sea battle. Not to
mention a brief cameo by Captain
Horatio Nelson. Fans of this
series should enjoy this addition
to The Fighting Anthonys.
Review Copyright
©2018 Cindy Vallar
Peregrine
By Michael Aye
Boson Books, 2012, print ISBN
978-0-917990-74-8, US $20.99
e-book ISBN 978-0-917990-73-1, US
$9.99
The arrival of the
French fleet off Sandy Hook, New
York in 1778, becomes a waiting
game as the British face their
new enemy across a sand bar
during the American Revolution.
When conditions finally permit
the French to advance, they opt
not to engage in a battle of
broadsides and sail away. No one
knows why, but their absence
allows Lieutenant George “Jep”
Jepson to head south for
Barbados to deliver his
passenger, Sir Victor MacNeil,
who works for the Foreign
Office.
Sir
Victor needs the assistance of
Vice Admiral Lord Gilbert
Anthony and his squadron. They
are to collect colonial
prisoners of war from St.
Augustine, Florida and deliver
them to Norfolk, Virginia for a
prisoner exchange. The mission
has added importance for Sir
Victor. Among those to be
reclaimed are British spies and
should their true identities be
discovered, they will face dire
consequences. Gil’s presence is
needed because of his
acquaintanceship with the
rebels’ representative, whom he
met earlier in St. Augustine.
No
matter how much planning takes
place, something always goes
awry. Something is amiss with
Bart, Gil’s coxswain and
longtime friend, and when the
truth is uncovered, his life is
in grave jeopardy. Aside from
keeping a wary eye out for
French privateers, distant
gunfire alerts men aboard
Captain Gabriel Anthony’s Peregrine
of danger. When he sends a
boat to discover what the fog
conceals, they discover a dead
body minus its uniform. Later,
they come upon an American
brigantine that has taken a
British frigate. When Gabe and
his men draw close, one of the
captured seamen is tossed over
the side before the brigantine
sails away. The rescued victim
delivers a chilling message that
resurrects haunting images from
the past for Gabe, his uncle
Dagan, and Lieutenant Davy.
This
book is the fifth entry in The
Fighting Anthonys series. It
opens with a list of characters
in the series and ends with a
glossary. Poems by the author
introduce each section of the
story, which is divided into
three parts. One caveat
regarding the character list is
that it doesn’t include all of
them. This volume introduces Sir
Victor’s servant, but his name
is not mentioned in his first
scene. When he reappears, it’s
disconcerting for readers to
meet him by name and not
immediately know who he is.
The
unfolding of this adventure is
uneven in the telling. Readers
expecting Gil and Gabe to take
center stage, as has been the
case in previous volumes, will
find that this title is more a
tale about men who serve with
them, such as Bart, Jep, and
Dagan. Gabe doesn’t become a
truly integral character until
late in the story. There are
also occasions where
misspellings and poor wording
interfere with the flow of
sentences.
Otherwise,
Aye’s medical background and
naval experience provide tense
scenes, sometimes with
unexpected twists. This is
especially true in those
involving Bart’s operation and
Dagan’s handling of their new
nemesis who has ties to the
past. Fans of the series will
enjoy Peregrine, but
readers new to the series will
probably prefer starting with
earlier titles to get a better
feel for the characters and
their adventures.
Review Copyright
©2018 Cindy Vallar
Leopard
By Michael Aye
Boson Books, 2017, print ISBN
978-1-938463-30-3, US $20.99
e-book ISBN 978-1-938463-31-0,
US $9.99
The
seventh book in The Fighting
Anthonys series opens with a
captain from Grand Cayman
complaining to Vice Admiral
Lord Gilbert Anthony about
the audacious American
privateer who sails right
into Georgetown Harbor and
takes the captain and others
prisoner, and then ransoms
their ships back to them,
minus everything but their
hulls. He dares to give them
a certificate to show to
other privateers exempting
them from being taken again
during the next forty-two
days. There is little Gil or
the Royal Navy can do, since
they are already stretched
to the limit, but he sets
sail with a small fleet to
make life miserable for
these American upstarts.
Captain
Sir Gabriel Anthony finds
himself betwixt wind and
water, for overstepping his
authority, risking his ship
and men, in an adventure
that took them far from the
Caribbean. Vowing to ruin
Gabe, Admiral Sir Winston
Kirkstatter writes a
scathing letter to the
Admiralty, then sets sail
aboard the prize warship
Gabe captured, leaving Gabe
to wait to see what his fate
will be. In the meantime,
Gil can’t afford to lose
either Gabe or his men, so Trident
is sent to Antigua for
repairs. Along the way, they
happen upon flotsam, dead
bodies floating in the
water, and the jury-rigged
HMS Leopard, a
vessel providing escort to a
merchant convoy. At the time
of the attack, those aboard
Leopard didn’t know
that Spain had declared war
on England in support of her
ally, France, who had joined
with the Americans in their
fight for independence. The
Dons decimated the convoy
and killed or wounded the
more senior officers aboard
Leopard.
Upon
reaching Antigua, the crews
of Trident and Leopard
band together to staff
the latter and Gabe is
ordered to seek out his
brother to let him know that
the Dons are allied with the
traitorous Americans. This
information is combined with
news from the ransomed
merchant captain about a
fleet of French warships
carrying 6,000 troops to aid
the rebels in their fight
and the growing menace of
American privateers on the
prowl. Gil and his officers
seek out the enemy, but
finding them isn’t an easy
task in the Caribbean.
The
story, which takes place in
1780, includes several
nail-biting sea battles and
an unsuspected dupe used by
a spy, as well as a wedding
and an appearance by Rear
Admiral Lord Cornwallis. Two
new lieutenants join the
series: one is the son of a
Scottish lord and a Creek
princess; the other is a
black naval officer, who is
referred to numerous times
before finally making his
appearance halfway through
the book. The resolution of
Gabe’s quandary is deftly
resolved with a twist of
fate that has a profound
effect on Admiral
Kirkstatter.
Rather
than a tale seamlessly woven
together, Leopard is
more a series of vignettes
sewn together, which at
times give the story a
disjointed feeling. It also
disrupts the cohesive flow
from one event to the next,
making it hard for readers
to connect with the
characters. The book lacks a
good proofing, which would
have caught instances like
"Shouting down to the gun
deck, Gabe shouted to
Lieutenant Bufford to be
ready" (tells the reader
twice that Gabe has to
shout), or "Captain Davy,
who’d had little more than a
quick honeymoon with Ariel
before weighing anchor,"
(incomplete sentence), as
well as occasional missing
or misspelled words. (161
and 176, respectively)
The
shining moments in the story
are Michael Aye’s original
poetry, which is presented
at the beginning of each of
the three parts of this
book, and his depiction of
the Great Hurricane of 1780,
which is estimated to have
been a Category 5 storm with
winds in excess of 200 miles
per hour. Not only do
readers witness the storm
while aboard the navy’s
ships, but they also get to
experience it from the
perspectives of Gil’s and
Gabe’s families and friends
who go on a picnic the day
the hurricane hits. The poem
“Oh Blow You Hurricane”
perfectly captures the mood
of what transpires in the
story.
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