Pirates and Privateers
The History of Maritime
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Cindy Vallar, Editor
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P.O. Box 425,
Keller, TX 76244-0425
Books for Adults ~ Nautical Fiction
Blue Water, Scarlet Tide
Capital's
Punishment
Bellerophon's
Champion
Blue Water, Scarlet Tide
By John M. Danielski
Penmore Press, 2016, ISBN 978-1-942756-96-5, US $21.95
e-book ISBN 978-1-942756-97-2, US $8.50
Royal Marine Captain Thomas
Pennywhistle swims ashore in July 1814, to
rescue a captured lieutenant who is
scheduled to hang as a spy on the morrow.
He succeeds in the endeavor, but not
without cost, and the result adds to his
haunting memories of war. Fighting had
never been his goal, but an incident
during his days at medical school forced
him onto this path – one at which he is
very good. Thus his next mission is to
find a suitable landing site along the
Chesapeake Bay for British troops from
Admiral Cockburn’s flotilla. Unlike last
time, he’s determined that the slaves who
help him will secure their freedom.
He and Gabriel Prosser meet at a
pre-arranged rendezvous near the Patuxent
River, but are unexpectedly interrupted by
four men. These Marylanders have come to
move hidden gold, and from them he learns
that they are responsible for the loss of
a missing ship and her crew. Pennywhistle
recovers the British payroll, locates a
good place to land soon-to-arrive
regiments of veteran infantry, and
arranges to meet Gabriel at an extraction
point. But a posse of slave hunters, with
their hounds, track down the runaway
slave, only to find themselves led into an
ambush.
As the landing time nears for the British
troops, Pennywhistle and his scouting
party head toward Bladensburg, Maryland.
One of their first objectives is to locate
the U. S. Navy’s flotilla of gunboats –
perhaps the only real impediment to the
British advance on Washington. Like an
unevenly balanced scale, war pits success
against failure, each with its own
consequences. This time an innocent soul
deepens the indelible wound in his psyche,
yet also brings him face-to-face with his
doppelganger, an American Marine.
Captain John Tracy should have killed the
British officer rifling through his
papers, but is astonished to find himself
looking at a man who could be his twin.
Although the similarities are too close to
be coincidental, he vows to avenge the
slaying of six-year-old Molly. Duty must
come first, however, and with the British
on the march, he prevents them from using
the flotilla against his fellow Americans.
Then he must locate his commander to
report what he knows. On the way to
Washington, he encounters a group of
drunken teens shooting at Redcoats as they
come ashore. His conscience forces him to
act, so he launches a daring rescue to
save at least some of the lives of these
miserable wastrels.
In the ensuing pages of this tale, which
takes us up to the moments before the
Battle of Bladensburg, we accompany the
British as they endure marching through
enemy terrain in wool uniforms on hot,
humid, summer days. We witness surprising
and bloody encounters with American
marines and inexperienced militia,
including an attack from the air in a
hot-air balloon and an audacious escape
through enfilading fire. We also
experience the same frustrations and
astonishments as Pennywhistle and Tracy
when they encounter the stunning
ineptitude of American leaders. Not to
mention the startling, yet refreshing,
introduction of a frontier sharpshooter,
who almost succeeds in taking down
Pennywhistle.
Most chapters in this third book in the
Royal Marine Captain Thomas Pennywhistle
series are of average length, but several
are between twenty-five and forty-seven
pages long. Readers will encounter
occasional misspellings and missing words,
as well as several instances where certain
phrases may pull the reader out of the
story. For example, in 1814, Washington is
known as Washington City, rather than
Washington, DC (45), and while the effects
of adrenaline (415) are familiar, the word
itself isn’t coined until its discovery in
1901 by a Japanese chemist. The inclusion
of salicylic acid as the active ingredient
in aspirin (106) also intrudes into the
story.
On the other hand, Blue Water, Scarlet
Tide is a thought-provoking and
you-are-there recreation of the days
leading up to the British invasion of our
nation’s capital. Most of the action takes
place on land, but a few water encounters
provide edge-of-your-seat thrills and
heart-stopping action. The story provides
readers with a good understanding of the
differences between the two armies and
ably showcases the contrast between
militia and professional soldiers.
Danielski’s strength in crafting stories
lies in his knowledge of history and
experience as a historic interpreter.
These skills allow him to transport us
back to a crucial time in the War 1812 to
find ourselves marching alongside the
troops, experiencing the scratch of wool
against sweaty skin, the constant biting
of insects, and the throat-parching thirst
of trekking along dusty roads under a
brutal sun. He also conveys with keen
insight the physical and psychological
toll war takes on men, especially those
who have engaged the enemy for more than a
decade. Interwoven through Tracy’s story
is a curious mystery about a secret
organization that could lead him down a
traitorous path. For Pennywhistle, there
is an alluring, but highly impractical
(the captain’s conclusion, not mine),
romantic twist. Then there’s the
intriguing thread regarding an occurrence
in the distant past that somehow unites
these two men in the present. It is hoped
that the fourth installment in the series,
Capital’s Punishment, will provide
resolutions to these story lines as the
author once again transports us back to
the fateful battle that preceded the
burning of the White House.
Review Copyright ©2010 Cindy Vallar
Capital’s Punishment
By John M. Danielski
Penmore Press, 2017, ISBN 978-1-946409-24-9, US
$19.50
e-book ISBN 978-1-946409-25-6, US $6.50
The
heat of August 1814 is unbearable,
especially for soldiers wearing wool
uniforms, yet Royal Marine Captain
Thomas Pennywhistle explores the
road ahead of the invasion force
marching on Washington. At thirty
years old, years of war have left
him with a jaded heart and scarred
soul, but chivalry remains as much a
part of him as duty and honor. He
quickly dispatches armed deserters
from the Maryland Militia
threatening an elderly woman trying
to protect her farm animals from
scavengers, before continuing with
his mission. Along the way, he also
contemplates the American marine who
could almost be his twin. The truth
tarnishes his idolized father, but
he accepts that U. S. Marine Captain
John Tracy must be his brother.
Tracy and his
marines, as well as numerous other
officers, find it difficult to
prepare a defense of the capital
because contradicting orders from
their commanding officer and
interfering politicians
countermand army operations. Tracy
is among the seasoned fighters who
realize that they have no chance
of winning the upcoming battle
outside Bladensburg. The unknown
is how badly they will lose it.
For him, another question concerns
him. If and when he meets his
brother – a stranger until a short
while ago – will he be capable of
killing him?
Wherever Pennywhistle
goes, fighting is sure to follow,
so if Sammie Jo Matthews wants to
shoot any high-ranking enemy
officers, she only has to trail
him. From her hiding space, she
watches and waits for her chance.
She’s as much aware of him as he
is of her, which is why he spared
her life after she tried to
bushwhack him. She’s honor bound
to not shoot him, but never
promised to stop killing British
redcoats. The problem comes when
she shoots a fellow American to
protect Pennywhistle. Not only has
she given away her position, she’s
betrayed her country. Which leaves
her in a pickle. She may be
beautiful, but she’s a backwoods
sharpshooter and no way will she
ever fit into his world. At least,
that’s what Pennywhistle, his
brother, and his friends believe.
She’ll just have to convince them
otherwise – a tough thing to
accomplish on the eve of battle
and when he’s washed his hands of
her.
Capital’s
Punishment is a fast-paced,
galvanizing depiction of the
devastating defeat of the
Americans at Bladensburg and
burning of the White House and
other government buildings in
Washington. The action,
interspersed with lulls before
storms, easily transports readers
back in time to witness the most
demoralizing event in the War of
1812. Rather than present a single
perspective of what occurs,
Danielski allows readers to
experience history from a variety
of British and American
viewpoints, thus allowing us to
gain a better understanding of why
this unfolded as it did.
From time to time,
there are chinks in the story:
misspelled or missing words and
disconcerting phrases that occur
when the author interrupts to
explain some point. Two such
examples involve a soldier who
decides it’s "time for some French
leave, what would be labeled AWOL
by future generations," and the
preacher whose "irresistible
personal magnetism that enraptured
a man almost against his will;
later generations would call it
'charisma.'" (235 and 279
respectively) The problem with
these explanations is that they
pull readers out of the story.
Readers may also find the
resolution of the "insidious
secessionist conspiracy"
unsatisfactory and the lengthy
explanation of how Sammie Jo
speaks tedious.
These are minor
imperfections when weighed against
the pivotal way Danielski brings
to life three days of a war that
spanned three years. He paints a
graphic depiction of the realities
of war, never glamorizing what
transpires and always showing how
it affects those who experience
it. He vividly recreates the
sights, sounds, and smells of the
aftermath of battle. His
interpretation of the storm that
struck Washington and the
surrounding area while the city
burned unfolds in a way that
places readers in the midst of the
rain, wind, and terror. The
colloquial dialogue some
characters speak helps to round
out the feel of the time period
and provides readers with unique
mental images that are easily
grasped. One example comes when
two former slaves are spying on
Americans gathering to launch a
counterstrike on the British. “Did
you get a look at their faces?
Every man jack in that column was
as hungry for a fight as a dog
spotting a steak bone.” (290)
Perhaps the most
striking facet in Capital’s
Punishment is the portrayal
of war versus civility. Time and
again, survival forces men and
women to come to grips with
realities that require them to do
immoral acts, which are counter to
the morals on which they’ve been
raised. While the final
confrontation between
Pennywhistle’s veteran soldiers
and common Americans led by a
fire-and-brimstone preacher who
imagines himself to be a
modern-day Oliver Cromwell, is
fictional, it is also
heart-stopping, edge-of-your-seat,
and breathtaking. The dénouement
is poignant, unexpected,
revealing, and indelible.
Review
Copyright ©2018 Cindy Vallar
Bellerophon’s Champion:
Pennywhistle at Trafalgar
By John M. Danielski
Penmore Press, 2019, ISBN 978-1-946409-86-7,
US $19.50
e-book ISBN 978-1-946409-87-4, US $5.50
Distraught over being jilted by
her fiancé, Pennywhistle’s beloved cousin
kills herself. Thomas, a medical student,
misread the signs and blames himself,
which is why he intervenes when he
witnesses a gentleman thrashing a woman.
The cascade of events that follow forever
alter his life. Instead of becoming a
doctor, he joins the Royal Marines.
Three years
later, on 21 October 1805, First
Lieutenant Thomas Pennywhistle finds
himself aboard HMS Bellerophon, a
ship of the line more commonly referred to
by her crew as the “Billy Ruffian.” The
vessel is one of twenty-seven, approaching
Cape Trafalgar and the combined fleets of
France and Spain. Before long, the two
enemies will engage in the battle Admiral
Nelson has long sought. It will pit his
ships against thirty-three ships of the
line, armed with 2,636 guns and manned by
26,000 men. Nelson’s warships carry only
2,200 guns and 18,400 seamen and marines.
Since his
commander suffers from consumption, Thomas
is responsible for the men serving under
him. He is an excellent marksman and
hunter, but has never applied either
talent in fighting. The coming conflict
will provide the perfect opportunity to
test his skills in actual battle. He has
also provided some of the crew with
sword-fighting instruction, so they might
better defend the ship if boarded. The two
second lieutenants serving with him are
Luke Higgins and Peter Wilson.
Higgins is
an Irishman, the youngest officer aboard,
and only joined the marines eight weeks
earlier. From Thomas’s perspective,
Higgins likens “the great conflict ahead
[to] a giant version of some schoolyard
tussle.” (30) Yet he has the determination
and passion to be a hero, and he wants to
emulate Pennywhistle, who he sees as an
older brother.
Wilson may
have gentlemanly manners and a sharp mind,
but few trust him. Nor does it help that
he’s particularly adept at playing cards
and is owed money by many of the officers.
Joining the marines wasn’t his preferred
option, but it was the only way that he
could disappear before becoming embroiled
in a legal suit. The last thing he wishes
to become is a hero and he’s not
particularly keen to stand in harm’s way
during the forthcoming battle. Thomas
finds him disturbing, and the ring Wilson
wears also niggles at Thomas’s memory, but
he hasn’t a clue why that might be.
The story
unfolds from the perspectives of a variety
of characters, including those mentioned
above and the Bellerophon’s
captain, schoolmaster, several crewmen and
marines, the surgeon, and two women – Mary
Stevenson, the gunner’s pregnant wife, and
Nancy Overton, whose husband is the
sailing master. This diversity allows
readers to experience the breadth of
battle in all its horror and glory. There
are also a number of animals aboard, whose
antics before, during, and after the
battle provide humorous interludes and
grim reality that contrasts with the
experiences of the men and women.
The battle
commences at noon, and the twenty-six
chapters depicting it provide more than
enough evidence to prove it was a “long
and bloody affray,” as one character
foresees. The first fourteen chapters show
how each character prepares and what he or
she thinks prior to the first shot being
fired. These pages may not pass quickly,
yet they allow readers to get a feel for
the slow passage of time that the
participants experience, or as the author
writes “the minutes were moving at the
pace of crippled turtles traversing fields
of molasses” – a passage that vividly
describes the battle when the wind
slackens as much as it does the long wait
for the engagement to begin. (147)
Although
this is the fourth Pennywhistle book to be
published, it actually takes place prior
to the previous books in the series and it
explains how Thomas comes to join the
Royal Marines. The only drawback to the
story is the lack of proofreading. There
are too many misspellings, missing words,
duplicated words, and misplaced
apostrophes to go unnoticed. Yet the
author has a gift of crafting phrases that
vividly get the point across, as when he
compares an amputation to peeling an
onion.
Danielski
expertly depicts the battle in a way that
compels readers to keep reading in spite
of the gruesome and brutal realities of
war. He makes readers care about the
characters, which makes for poignant,
gut-wrenching scenes, while at the same
time portrays the determination and
self-sacrifice the participants willingly
made to protect others. He also
commendably demonstrates that war cares
little for who and what a man is or does.
A man might overcome a personal struggle
only to be removed from the action without
rhyme or reason.
Review Copyright ©2018
Cindy Vallar
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