Cindy
Vallar
Author,
Editor, & Pirate Chronicler |
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I love the
story -- it's mesmerizing. ~ Anastasia Abboud I loved this story! I was totally swept up in the story, it felt like a fairy tale in a way with the 3 men Rona had to choose from. The descriptions, the names and some of the words gave me a true sense of being there and I could visualise the setting. ~ Laura Smith LOVED this short story. You really took me into the era and action sites. Your characters were also full of life. ~ Kelly Ann Scott I'm just a blue collar, 8th-grade dropout, but I love a good story and [this one] had me hooked. I found myself wishing it would go on for a while longer. ~ Eric O., Virginia I found myself caught up in Rona's story -- I was easily transported back in time while reading it. And I loved the imagery you used. My favorite line was "The wind wailed, as if warning her of wile and risk within those forbidding walls." So poetic. I'd like to know what happens to her and Kyle. ~ Chanta R. I really enjoyed how you tied everything so well into the narrative. The ending was intriguing -- both frustrating and exciting! ~ Jennifer H. Your short story was most enjoyable. In the few pages that the story entailed, I was swept away. I definitely agree with the other readers' comments. An excellent story. ~ Shannon Your story is wonderfully written and a fine tale. ~ Polly I'd like to take a moment to tell you how much I enjoyed your short story. I agree with the person who commented, "Please make this a novel." Your characters were so real, and every one of them was enjoyable. Congratulations on a job well done. ~ Penny Odin's Stone is absolutely fabulous. You must write a sequel and tell us what happens to Rona and Kyle. ~ Paula I loved it. I thought it was really romantic and wonderful. I still remember it long after I read it. ~ Vonda The story is beautifully written and enables you to know and like the heroine and her surly hero. ~ M. Gerling I thought it was wonderful! ~ Abby A light witty story. One I thoroughly enjoyed. ~ Judy Is there a sequel? I loved it!! ~ Christie I just *loved* the interplay between Rona & Kyle. And I really admired the way she stood up to Alexander on behalf of his son and herself. Impetuous, yes, but also in a very classy way. ~ Lynne, a reference librarian in Ohio PLEASE make Odin's Stone into a book. ~ Cheri I especially love historical Scottish romances, and it's been since I read Odin's Stone. I am so glad I found it online. ~ Jacquelin I loved the story. ~ Seespider Your Odin love story was fab. Really moved along and captured this reader. ~ Jean Maxwell |
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